First viewing of my film

My film has now been shown to the class, after I have finally completed it, editing little bits and pieces. I feel that it went very well when screened as the only critisim I got was that I could make the zoom smoother. I understand this however I think that it would have been very difficult as I was zoomed out with my camera on the tripod and I had to keep locking the zoom and moving the bag then continuing with the camera. This was quiet hard and I think that I managed to zoom as smoothly as possible.